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One, Two, Three
Breathe in slowly.
Count again.
One,
Two,
Three.
Take in another breathe and let go.
Release all your fear.
One,
Release all bad thoughts.
Two,
Take in good thoughts and feelings.
Three,
Let go.
Let go of me.
Breathe.
Fill your lungs to the brim.
Breathe.
Good.
count again. Start now.
One.
Two.
Three.
Submerse yourself in the water.
Now.
Hold it in.
One.
Two.
Three.
Breathe.
Swallow the water and let go.
Let go of everything.
Breathe in slowly.
Count again.
One,
Two,
Three.
Take in another breathe and let go.
Release all your fear.
One,
Release all bad thoughts.
Two,
Take in good thoughts and feelings.
Three,
Let go.
Let go of me.
Breathe.
Fill your lungs to the brim.
Breathe.
Good.
count again. Start now.
One.
Two.
Three.
Submerse yourself in the water.
Now.
Hold it in.
One.
Two.
Three.
Breathe.
Swallow the water and let go.
Let go of everything.
This is inspired by my feelings towards things right now. I feel like I am drowning myself slowly. Breathing in only to stay alive for one more day. Just to feel myself be ripped apart. But I know I must let go. Let go of a lot of things so I can heal. One, two, three. Breathe again. Slowly. Yeah. So I need to live. I need to learn to let go. Because some things come back. Some don't. Life goes on regardless your feelings. Unless you kill yourself. But please none of you who read this do that. There is more to live for than you know. Who care's if shit seems bad atm? It will never get better untill you let it. If you love someone and they leave you. Move on. It will be impossible to at first. But time heals all wounds. Just let go of pain. Meditation is a good way to do this. Find yer power animal. 
like on fightclub. Hang with friends. Or even family. Just let go of pain. Things get better.
And I know submerse is prolly spelt wrong. Idc.
Brittanie
like on fightclub. Hang with friends. Or even family. Just let go of pain. Things get better.And I know submerse is prolly spelt wrong. Idc.
Brittanie © 2008 - 2024 mychemicalromance101
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this was so smart. So smart. I love the structure it's pure genius. the poem was Inspiring, heavy, different, and strong; just like all poems should be. Very wonderful, I think I'm gonna cry. Great job.
One of my favorite poems so far and it's something everyone can relate to. You seem so wise and know what life is. Pure talent. You blew me away.
Great job.One of my favorite poems so far and it's something everyone can relate to. You seem so wise and know what life is. Pure talent. You blew me away.