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you rip out my heart,
toss it to the floor.
i look at you with eyes of pain.
my heart you crush with your shoe.

i feel, that i mean nothing to you.
how can you say that you love me,
and then do this to me?
what have I done?

my blood covers the floor,
i live no more.
you have killed all that was left of me.

now am i pretty enough?
with my cut up face,
and my bleeding wrists.

now am i good enough,
to be with you?
once more im bleeding for you,
and you dont notice.

can you see the pain in my eyes?
the scars on my wrists?
or even the marks on my face,
all fresh and new?

here i bleed,
i bleed for you.
and now it is time to start over new.
i'll forget your face,
forget the lies.
for now is not my time to die.

so now i will tell you goodbye,
this was the last chance you'll ever get.
for never again will i bleed for you.
:iconmychemicalromance101:

Author's Comments

yeah boredom. and pain.

about a past relationship that ended badly, im hoping that wont happen this time. i dont think it will.

i about cried while rereading over this. it brought back so much pain. though i love it.

PLEASE IF YOU TAKE THE TIME TO LOOK TAKE THE TIME TO GIVE ME YOUR INPUT.

i give the writters meow permission to post this.

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:iconari-ku:
woah, i assume that inspired by that bulletin?

this is pretty cool.

<3

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My sigh blows you away
And I watch
As the person I was
Leaves with you...
:iconmychemicalromance101:
no acctually past relationships. thank you. <3

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and as i walk away from you,
i cant help but cry.
bet you wont click!
:iconthewritersmeow:
:iconskarson:
awh. very well-written. sad, but well-written as always.

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Forever Young,
Skarson
:iconmychemicalromance101:
awwe yay. thank you. and yes 'tis a bit sad but i wrote what i was feeling earlier. im good now. :D :heart:

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and as i walk away from you,
i cant help but cry.
bet you wont click!
:iconthewritersmeow:
:iconalpha-white-fang:
:hug: :pet: It's ok... The same thing kinda happened to me. The guy got me to do so many things for him and he told me it was ok. He'd never tell and he loved me... That's what he said... But then we got back at school. He dumped me and told all my secrets... And I hated him with every nerve in my body :furious:

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:iconmychemicalromance101:
grr! bassically same thing that happened to me and im hoping it wont happen again. i think my sunset is a good guy.

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and as i walk away from you,
i cant help but cry.
bet you wont click!
:iconthewritersmeow:
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:iconisidark:
it's so sad... but beautiful...
i hope you won't never cry again for love...

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i wanna fly away from myself... :blackrose:

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